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No, your impulse is fairly correct--as I said at the beginning, there aren't any real conflicts in either, they rely more on worldbuilding and a sense of "wonder". In that sense, they work pretty well, I can't gush about them as really "good" stories. I certainly responded to the end of both with a "that's it? Ok." Unlike AiA, which was a good story on its own, these really feel like parts of a an unrevealed whole.